Do you outline your article, story or novel before you start writing? Outlining has always struck me as sounding a bit too much like work, and I’ve preferred to think of my creative endeavors as being freeing! unrestrained! Unfortunately, I‘ve come to the realization that my unstructured writing usually winds up being plot-less! unfinished!
One reason I avoid outlining is that I’m not entirely sure how to go about it. I don’t think I need to outline the same way I did in high school, with all those Roman numerals and indentations and such. Even less appealingly, “outlining” was big in law school (as in, “have you outlined the Torts chapter on Trespass to Chattels yet?”) Yuck! I try to avoid thinking about law school whenever possible.
I know there are no “rules” for how best to outline, say, a novel, and that it’s all very individual, whatever works best for each writer, etc., etc. But the thing is, I’m overly wordy and impatient on a good day, so I’ve always thought that once I start taking the time to write a really long, detailed outline of the story rattling around in my head—well, I might as well just start drafting the story and see where it ends up. Unfortunately, this usually means that my stories just keep going… and going…with no end in sight.
Well, it’s finally dawned on me that this approach is not working out. As much as I would like to think that my stories grow and blossom and wind their way toward an inevitable and satisfying finish…. that really never happens. So what’s an aspiring novelist to do? I don’t like outlining, but I feel I must at least try it, and I really, really don’t want to use Roman numerals.
Well, it seems the stars have aligned to help me on my way!
First, I found this great Writer’s Digest Magazine blog post called “How to Outline (The Easy Way) Like Janet Evanovich” that a) makes me feel better since it seems I’m not the only reluctant outliner out there, and b) shows an example of how million-billion-gazillion-copies-sold author Janet Evanovich outlines: with pictures! Well, not really with pictures—but she uses a more visual approach to outlining— a “storyboard” method. That seems do-able to me.
Second, the perfect, no-risk laboratory for my outlining/storyboarding experiment happens to be starting TODAY! National Novel Writing Month has begun! I’ve participated in NaNoWriMo for the past two years— just plunging in with a whole lot of seat-of-my-pants writing and hoping for the best. Both times, I started out strong, writing a chapter or two of an actual, continuous story—only to hit a wall, and have my Nano experience deteriorate into more of a daily personal journal rather than culminate in an actual story. Well this time, I’ll face Nano with a storyboard outline! I’ll stick to it and see if I can write through a whole story– with a beginning, middle and (this would be unprecedented) an end. If it’s bad, it’s bad. I don’t care as long as it gets finished. That’s all part of the fun of Nano– you are allowed (encouraged!) to write badly, just as long as you write (finish!) your novel.
So, I’ll be making an outline…. right after I finish this blog post! (Just to prove to you how much I abhor outlining, I couldn’t bring myself to outline this blog post about outlining. Perhaps that explains why it sort of veered off into being more about ‘finishing things’ than ‘outlining’, per se.)
Now back to my original question: Do you outline? What do your outlines look like? Do you stick to them? I’d really love to know what works for you!

I don’t like to outline, but I do find that it helps–for non-fiction and fiction writing. It helps me see the overall flow and structure of my writing and that helps. I don’t do it as often as I should though, so I’m trying to work on that…..Congrats on being FP!
I definitely see how outlining would help with ‘the big picture’ (or as you point out, the overall flow and structure.) I am going to start taking outlining more seriously! Thanks so much for your comment!
I usually do a form of outlining in my head before I write, trying to sift out my major points, or plot developments depending on the type of writing, then let fly with the words. As you said near the beginning writing is freeing and outlining, sadly, is not!
Exactly! I like the ‘freeing’ part a lot. But I guess there’s something to be said for doing some up-front work– which is where the outlining would come in for me. I admire your ability to keep your outline in your head… I think that’s where I run into trouble. Thanks, Joe, for your comment! Much appreciated.
Like you, I always believed I didn’t need an outline; I wrote my first two novellas that way and they worked out perfectly (of course, they were also only 15,000 words long). I started my first novel with no more than ‘a solid understanding’ of what it was all about – but I never got it finished because I kept losing track of the story line and veering off in too many different directions. So for the next one, I attempted to create a detailed outline – but I spent so much time on it that I lost interest in the story (I felt as if I’d already TOLD it via the outline) and gave up. For my latest attempt, I developed a rough ‘sketch’ of the story (a few points for each chapter – who’s in each scene, the location and time frame, what the conflict is all about and how it gets resolved [or not] – keeping in mind exactly when the key plot points needed to occur throughout). I have it all in an Excel spreadsheet that I keep open while I’m writing (so I can refer to it). That approach worked really well for me, and I finished the book in six weeks and within 1,000 words of my goal.
Last year I participated in NaNoWriMo for the first time. I started with some ideas that I jotted down. Not really an outline, just a starting point. I had never written anything longer than a story before, so I had trouble keeping track of the action.
I began to fill in an outline as I wrote…to keep the details straight, and help me find my way. I also kept both files open as I wrote, for reference.This was much easier for me than trying to look ahead too far. My novel found its way in surprising twists and turns that I didn’t anticipate at the beginning.
I finished my 50,000 words due to stubbornness and the fact that I was unemployed and told myself that this was my job. Best wishes for success this year!
Margo- thanks for sharing your writing/outlining process. (And congrats on finishing your novellas/novel! ) I completely relate to how you described your approach to writing your first novel — with a “solid understanding” of the plot– AND I completely relate to then losing track of the story line! Your recent success with ‘sketching’ out the story and keeping track of it while writing inspires me to do the same.
JM– first, congrats on finishing Nano last year (are you doing it again this year?) Your fill-it-in-as -you-go outlining technique sounds like a good way to keep a balance between ‘free-form’ writing and having some structure. Oh, and I am plenty stubborn too — I agree that this personality trait helps alot in pushing through to the end of Nano!
I’m an outliner myself! I prefer it as I can write only a small bit of info but I can still write freely. I’m doing NaNo too! Good luck!
Good luck to you too! Thanks for stopping by popcorntheblog!
I outline my novels. First I write the chapter down with a summary of what happens in the chapter. I do this for all the chapters, and then I give a brief summary of each and every important character in the story. It’s actually been quite helpful in my writing, let me tell you.
One day I hope to have the self-discipline do this type of ‘advanced’ outlining since I can totally see how it would help alot. (Plus tons of really successful writers do what you do– perhaps that’s why they are so successful! Something for me to think about…) Thank you so much for your comment!
thanks for giving me something to read. Good luck finding a way to keep yourself disciplined.
Outlining before writing reminds me of stretching before running – something you should do but often abandon in the impatience of wanting to get going. I usually start out with a rough outline, start writing and then occasionally refer back to the outline. Whatever works. Good luck with NaNo!
“Trespass to Chattels” sounds like d’Urbervillian sex romp.
Ha! Well, Jeni, if you liked Trespass to Chattels, you might also like “The Fertile Octogenarian” or “The Unborn Widow” — two Property Law concepts that would also make fine book titles (though perhaps of a different genre– not so Hardy-esque.) Thanks for stopping by popcorntheblog!
Like setting objectives and goals I try working backwards, starting the outline with where I want to end up and making some simple points/ steps to get there. I’m also quite visual so often draw and label small scenes for a rough storyboard, i’ve found this helps keep me on track without stifling creativity.
Not one, but TWO lightbulbs went on for me when I read your comment. Starting from the end and working backward appeals to my problem-solving nature. Plus, actually drawing out scenes — since I think I am a visual person– sounds like a great idea. I think both of these techniques would help me too– so thanks for sharing them!
My pleasure Adrienne, i hope you fund them as useful as i do.
I love using outlines! It helps me gather my thoughts before writing. Great post.
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Thanks, Michelle- and it’s just this sort of enthusiastic endorsement of outlines that has made me finally realize that I should give them a more serious look! Thanks for your comment, and I’ll be sure to check out your history plantation.
Thank you!
Out of necessity I learnt to outline. My non-fiction pieces became ungainly. Outlining taught me to focus to topic. Great post.
“Ungainly” is a perfect word to describe what was happening to my unstructured writing– at least to the longer pieces. Well, and the shorter pieces too. So, I think necessity is driving me to outline or storyboard too. Thanks for the compliment, and come visit us on popcorntheblog again soon!
I do outline, but a very rough one– and I definitely always stray from it. Once the story takes off, it literally seems to talk off for me and from me in directions that it’s meant to go and places I hadn’t concieved of. Good Luck NaNo-ing! I am too 3300 words in & hoping the momentum keeps on keeping on.
Thanks for sharing your perspective and process. I am definitely starting off with a ‘rough’ storyboard outline– see if it works, or if I need to be more or less structured. I agree that there is value in letting the story go to where it’s meant to go… although I need to keep an eye on making sure it winds up somewhere. GOOD LUCK on Nano– momentum is a a very good thing! And sincere thanks for commenting on my post. Hope to see you on popcorntheblog again!
I do this too. I find it helps give the freedom necessary for creativity while giving enough of a direction that it’s harder to get stuck. Recently, I ended up cutting off part of the last third of the book and restructuring the outline because the story had veered off in a different direction.
I just finished my fifth novel and outlines are probably the only reason I’ve ever finished anything. I’m decidedly undetailed, though. I just write a chapter plot, with a couple of sentences about what’s going to happen in each chapter and the main purpose it serves to me is in helping me figure out where to distribute the weight, if you will, of the story. Sometimes, after I finish the outline, I realize that way too much of the book is going to be focused on a relatively unimportant part of the plot. While I write, I always surprise myself with how closely I end up sticking to the outline/how much I end up referring to it.
Storyboarding has definitely piqued my interest, though, so maybe I’ll give it a try for Novel #6
Best of luck with NaNo and congratulations on being Freshly Pressed!
I’m impressed with your dedication to outlining – and having finished five novels ! I admit that I’m not nearly as disciplined… though I totally see your point about ‘distributing the weight’ of the story (great phrase!) I tend to start writing and then, once I’m going, to sketch very generally what might come later (which I then often ignore…) I always think of an outline as requiring way more detail than I’m ready to commit to – I like your more general approach. ‘m working on book 2 now and perhaps will give your method a try!
This type of anecdotal evidence is exactly why I’ve finally realized that i really should be outlining or storyboarding (or at least giving it a whirl!.) I too am extremely impressed with your achievement in finishing 5 novels! Kudos! Thanks for taking the time to leave your comment/perspective, and for the good-Nano-wishes!
Outlining is crucial to any large-scale writing. There is a difference between ‘hitting a word count’ and ‘good quality content’ – the former is a measure of scale used by publishers and editors to help shape what they buy. The latter is what writers have to strive for, and one way to do it is through a good outline. I like the idea of NaNoWriMo, but to me it always slightly mis-directs in that it focuses on that word count, whereas the real focus, to me, has to be on the content.
I had the same hesitation about NaNo until I tried it a few times. I agree that the end goal of writing has to have a focus on content, but what NaNo did for me was to build up my writing muscles. When I focus on content all the time, I tend to freeze up and only write “safe” things. NaNo has shown me what writing without restraint can do. (Which is piles of junk with a few gems that would never have happened without all the junk!)
Outlining carries a lot of benefits, but also a ton of risk in my opinion.
I don’t think anyone should ever design a story THROUGH an outline. You’ll just wind up creating a story via formula… and well, that’s not a good process.
My method:
Begin with a muse: something strong, evocative, and emotional. Expand upon it, let your characters live, interact, and sew chaos in your mind. Only after you have a good idea of what you are doing and who your characters are, should you create an outline. The outline, in a sense, is an organizer. It gives you temporal order, and establishes definable scenes that are easy to plan and write.
I don’t bother with outlines for short stories, but for my novel I’m definitely going to use one, if for no other reason so I can step back and see my story from a more distant and objective perspective. A novel is just too large to coherently visualize the temporal sequences in my mind.
At the same time, never consider an outline “final”. Sometimes, characters just want to do something you didn’t intend… let them.
Very wise words. I agree – it’s important to remember that the story has primacy over the outline, not the other way around. after all, an outline is so useful because you can change it ! On behalf of the popcorn team, thanks for reading and commenting!
I am on my second year of NaNoWriMo, and this year, I am definitely outlining. I have a couple of blog posts explaining what I wish to do this year, but last year, I went straight from my head. While I did have a beginning, some semblance of a middle, and somewhat of an end, I’m finding that outline is a massive help when it comes to storytelling. I can’t be George Martin who writes straight from his head. (According to him).
Good luck on your book!
We live and learn! So we will both have some sort of an outline in hand this year for Nano! Good luck- I hope you have great noveling success this month (and in the future!). Thank you for sharing your experience– hope to see you again here on popcorntheblog.
I do short outlines so I know what direction each scene is going. Hallie Ephron’s “Writing and Selling Your Mystery Novel” has a great chapter on the three act structure and outlining.
Thanks for the book recommendation – I find the three act structure so helpful in thinking about plot, even when not writing a mystery. I’ll definitely check out Hallie Ephron.
I bloody hate outlines, so this is fascinating. Will definitely have a look at how Janet Evanovich does it!
It certainly couldn’t hurt to see how Ms. Evanovich works her magic, and at least give it a whirl (at least that’s my current thinking.) Thanks so much for your comment (all the way from Dublin! My father’s hometown!)
Indeed, it’s definitely time to invest in a small whiteboard for such undertakings! No problem at all; haha, isn’t it crazy how websites like this bring people from across the world to talk?!
Yes, it is really amazing! I’ve actually learned so much from reading everyone’s comments- and checking out their blogs. This Freshly Pressed thing is very cool– what a great opportunity to get to “meet” so many other blogging kindred spirits. I hope you get lots of great use out of your new whiteboard! (I’ll have to pick one up myself…)
Instead of outlining, I jot down notes about where I want my story to go. These ideas hit me randomly, sometimes before I’ve started my story or sometimes after I’m well on my way. This lacks the structure of a good outline, but it works for me, especially since my characters constantly do and say things that I don’t expect, forcing my story to veer off into a completely different direction than planned!
I am a big note-keeper too– I have lots of snippets of dialogue and scenes etc. — but not really organized at all. So far , I have not been able to translate them successfully into something novel-shaped or story-shaped. But I defnitely want to make sure I find some way to weave them into my story. IAs long as you found a method that works for you– that ‘s the important thing! It’s actually been very reassuring to me in reading these comments that everyone has their own method that works for them– I just have to find mine. Thanks for taking the time to comment and sharing your ideas!
I always believed in outlining when I was writing reports in the office. That worked perfectly because I had all my ideas in my head about what I was going to say before I set about saying it. With fiction, though, it’s different. I’m attempting a science fiction short story in my blog: http://tinkerthinktank.wordpress.com and can only think through part of the plot at a time. I’m not used to writing so many words (I’m planning on 6000 words and even that is ultra long for me.) I’m half way through my story at the end of Chapter 5 now, and am still thinking through how the rest of the story will develop. Help!!
I completely relate to what you are saying– I have always found it MUCH easier to organize and write work-stuff than my own fiction. Like you, I usually only have bits and pieces of the plot sorted out– not the whole thing. That is why I am experimenting with this storyboarding/outlining process. I’m going to try to do more of the “work” (or ‘word-play’ as a friend of mine says) up front — try to work out the whole story, at least roughly, first, and then fill in the details. That’s the plan any way! I’ll check out your blog– thanks so much for leaving your comment!
~ For creative writing, I don’t do outlines. I just let my thoughts flow and rest when I can’t think of what to put in. For technical writing, I do outlines a lot because it makes the job easier and there are just some topics that must be approved first before finally releasing it to the client (user’s manual, installation/deployment guides, etc.). I suggest you discover what works best for you and give outline a try if it works. If it doesn’t, then just write on your terms. Remember, what works for Peter may not work well for John. Happy Writing, free soul! More Power!
What a thoughtful comment– thank you for the encouraging words. You are right- I am just trying to feel my way into a writing process that will work for me (it’s all so individual!). So many people have shared such great advice and ideas in their comments to this post– ultimately I’ll have to figure out what clicks for me. Right now, structure feels like the way to go. Happy writing to you too! Come visit us on popcorntheblog again!
When I started writing my first novel I didn’t start an outline until it was half written so I could figure out what was missing in the story since I don’t write scenes in order. Now when ever I outline I use notecard so I can lay everything out in order. Outlines are great tools for writers and there’s so many different ways to create them! Good luck on NaNoWriMo!! Keep on writting!
Thanks Kaela! I love the idea of notecards, actually — if my storyboard outline does not work out for me– notecards are next on my list to try. I like the idea of being able to move them around, in case the order of things changes. Good luck to you on your writing too, and thanks for the encouraging words! Come back and visit us again on popcorntheblog!
Outlines help me with critical writing. I do outlines for creative work too but don’t follow them. But the outlines help to see the sections concretely and then figure out what will not work or what needs to be moved. Also, I remember stuff I may have thought of in the past from the outlines if I’ve abandoned a piece for a while. Great post!
Thank you for the nice compliment– and thanks for sharing your writing process. It is really interesting to me to hear about how other writers work. It just goes to show that we all need to find what works best for us! For myself, I think a bit more “up front” work (such as making a storyboard or outline ) will help me do exactly what you say: see the various sections of my story more completely, determine if things are happening in the right order– how will I get from a to b to c, etc. Thanks for stopping by Popcorntheblog, and sharing your suggestions!
I am glad you wrote this as I am a student at University of California, San Diego. I was just thinking, why do I outline? It seems useless to me so thanks for sharing!
Well, thank you for making me feel like I’ve been of use to someone! Yes, I’m committed to trying to work with a structure– after using a free-form method for quite a while now, I’ve come to the conclusion that structure can be my friend! Hope you are enjoying UC San Diego– excellent school! Thanks for your comment– hope to see you back here on popcorntheblog again!
Outlining has always been a weakness for me! I try to work on it but its a work in progress, great post though and congrats on being Freshly Pressed! Keep writing!
Thank you so much for all your kind words (plus it makes me feel so much better to know I’m not the only outline-challenged writer out there!) We are all just works in progress, really. Yes, this Freshly Pressed thing was totally out of the blue- a very nice surprise! But so great to ‘meet’ so many people through these comments. Thanks for all the encouragement! Come visit us again her on popcorntheblog!
I only periodically plunge into writing short stories but have not tackled anything creative for a few years. Back in the days, I used pictures to outline. This way, I could enjoy the sensation of following a muse. The pictures were cut out of magazines and arranged on a large sheet of paper. The stories that evolved intrigue me still. I must get back into it.
For the technical writing that I do on a regular basis, the starting point is an outline of sorts – if a whiteboard is not handy, then large slabs of butcher’s paper (the type often used in seminars), brightly coloured markers or pencils. The subsequent brain dump then morphs into the outline.
Thank you for your encouraging post.
I love the idea of using pictures and images to develop characters, create a mood, imagine a landscape. I’m a fan of collages, and when writing a blog post on word collages I came across this blog post by an author who creates amazingly detailed collages for her writing: http://www.jennycrusie.com/more-stuff/book-collages/
It’s good to use all parts of our brain!
Wow, Carol, her site is so cool! I love her book collages. This reminds me of what I used to do to the walls of my room when i was in high school – wallpapered with images. To think that I can still do that now that I’m a grown-up is fabulous.
Thank for the link to Jenny’s site. Her collages are amazing.
I did the NaNoWriMo thing – wrote 50k words in a month. Then it took 2 years to make it into a book.
If I could give anyone some advice – don’t just do an outline; work, rework, then re-rework the plot line until you’re sick of it. Use storyboards, excel spreadsheets, anything you like. Then when you have the skeletal story – unleash your creative beast. If you don’t you will pen then discard 80% of the words you write.
Like everything else in life, writing is 90% preparation and10% perspiration.
Thanks for sharing this wise advice. Deep down I know you are right about the 90% preparation/10% persperation part (I was just hoping to avoid it, I guess, by going outline-less!) But some up-front work always makes the rest of the job (or story!) flow more smoothly. Thank you so much for your comment– much appreciated!
I have the opposite problem, I am a compulsive outliner. I have outline after outline in my novel workbooks; outlines for scenes, chapters, books, etc. Outlining can be a real distraction in and of itself.
I can see that happening to me! I might get obsessive about my outline (or storyboard) and focus on that instead of filling in the details. Well, I’m committed to at least giving it a shot. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
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really enjoyed this article and I know you will too.
Hi Sylvia, on behalf of the popcorn team, thanks for reblogging!
it was an awesome article!! I just had to share!
Thanks, Sylvia, for the nice compliment and for the generous re-blogging. Very much appreciated! (Also thanks for introducing us to the Motown Writers Network…Michigan Literary Network! It looks like a great resource for writers!)
Yes. No. Sometimes.
Outlining depends upon what I am writing and how I feel. Sometimes, I just write. Other times, I really dream sequence everything. I analyze where everything in the story is headed – plot.
Wow, I’m intrigued by the idea of dream sequencing. What is that?
Karen,
For me, I may be very wrong, but for me, dream sequencing is LIKE outlining. But, I do it in my head. I think through a story, dream it, over and over again. When I like what I have in my head, I start writing.
To me, that is most effective. Traditional outlining is second for fiction. And then I drop off from there. Because just writing at a keyboard is very erratic for me.
ghost.
I love that! “Yes. No. Sometimes.” That pretty much sums it up, doesn’t it? There is indeed a time and place for everything, Ghost! Including outlines, storyboards, notecards, etc. For me, the time has come for structure, so I’l be giving it go. Thanks so much for stopping by popcorntheblog– hope to hear from you again!
Adrienne,
You gotta help me on the storyboards and notecards ….
I HATE THEM.
OK, I don’t KNOW how to use them well. I feel like I get the worst part of outlining with few of the benefits when I use them.
Of course, I have only really used them with Scrivener. So, it may be that I haven’t used physical ones.
How do you use storyboards and notecards? Or, do you?
ghost.
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Are you writing?
Our fellow blogger tells us about OUTLINES.
One of the most discussed (& I think under used) parts of writing is the need for an outline.
But, some writers claim they NEVER use an outline.
I do not always. Do you use an outline when you write?
ghost.
Hi there, on behalf of Adrienne and the whole popcorn team – thank you for reblogging!
Thank you Tara,
Your team is putting out some great work!
ghost.
…also, a friend of mine prefers writing in hand and then punching in the keyboard for her blog post and she does it quite well. Liked your ‘outlining’ too.
Thank you Neeraj! I sometimes like to write by hand too– sometimes the words flow more easily that way– then I clean them up on the computer. I appreciate that you took the time to read my post and make a comment! Thank you!
How sweet! Thanks again.
I don’t outline at all and often think I should.
Well that is exactly what I was thinking when I started writing this blog post! It’s funny because it seems to be such an individual thing- knowing what works best for you. I’m just going through a trial and error process– and right now I am thinking some semblance of structure is in order. Thank you for commenting on this post! Much appreciated.
You are welcome. Good luck with your writing.
I am working on my first novel and I have to admit my outline is in my head. I know I want about 15 chapters with essentially three ‘acts’ – introduction, dilemma, resolution. I know the ending but getting there has been the exciting part. So n answer to your question, yes I am using an outline but it is very vague. However, I am on Chapter 7 right now so I am making progress. Good Luck with your novel this month.
This pretty much describes my outlining process – I keep it in my head until I run into trouble… then I start to organize and write (vague) things down. Good luck with your novel!
Well I am certainly not an advocate of getting too wrapped up in process if it impedes progress– and since it seems you are making plenty of progress, you have probably hit upon what works for you! (And if it works for Tara too- trust me you are in excellent company!) Congrats on being so far into your first novel! That is very exciting. Thanks for your comment and for sharing your thoughts on outlining!
Reckon I’ll have to check out this nano thing and see what it’s all about. I’ve only been writing since March – and only on blogs at that. But with all these great ideas and helpful suggestions, maybe I’ll finally take the plunge and write something more substantial!
I highly recommend Nano! For me, it helped get me into the chair every day to write– at least for the month of November. It’s inspiring to know that all those other writers are out there doing the same thing. (Plus the Nano organizers are really encouraging, supportive and funny!) Thanks for stopping by here and leaving your comment!
well, then – I’ll go there and check it out! Thanks so much!! and congrats on the FP!!
Thanks, everyone, for sharing all your thoughts on outlining (and Nano!) and for all the generous “likes”! There’s a ton of great advice in your comments. Come back and visit us here on popcorntheblog.com soon! Freshly pressed! What an amazing and wonderful surprise. ~ Adrienne
I used to feel exactly the same way as you – an outline would hamper the creative process and enjoyment of writing. The results: the first draft of a first novel that had so many plot-holes and contradictions it could have been listed as an example on tvtropes.org . My feeling now is better to outline beforehand than have to revise and get things to make sense after the fact.
I remember the days in high school and university of having to outline my essays before submission – my best ones being 10th grade history and first year sociology. I could never do that for a novel or any piece of creative writing.
The truth is, I often find myself figuring things out in the margins. Literally, writing little notes out at the side of the page. Once in my Writer’s Craft class that was all I did for the whole hour. I still haven’t written it out – five years later! But I tell you, I know what’s going to happen all the way through, though!
But in all honesty, I think the best way I’ve found to go about it is to at least think through the entire story – just key points and connections between things – and jot down either the parts I don’t think I will necessarily remember as I’m writing or little snippets that stand out so vividly I have to get them down on paper right away. This still lets me be as spontaneous as I like. I guess to be cliche, it’s the journey and not the destination. But knowing my destination makes sure that I’m less likely to get lost along the way, having nice little pit stops and road signs to guide me if I get a little off track.
I’m doing NaNoWriMo this time around too (though I’m aiming for at least 75 000 words, so I’m unlike to be finished by the end of the month), and this will be the first novel I’m writing with outline and research done at the outset. I’m tracking my progress over at my own blog.
Well, the light is finally coming on for me about outlining- so hopefully I can follow your example and move from being unfinished and “plot-holed” to something a bit more organized and complete! I chuckled at your reference to outlning your essays in 10th grade– I was going to mention in my blog post that I had to outline my social studies and English class essays– that’s what conjures up memories of Roman numerals for me. Anyway– thanks so much for leaving your thoughtful and helpful comment! Come visit us on popcorntheblog again soon! And best of luck with Nano!
I’m definitely in the same boat, (Plotless!! Unfinished!!) when I don’t have an outline. In fact, I’ve seemed to developed a habit of outline just about any activity I plan to do now, Ha!
Awesome article!
Thanks, Erica! It makes be feel better to know we have such excellent company in our outline-less boat! Perhaps I should take a page from your book (so to speak) and start outlining everything- – maybe I’d be more productive! Thank you so much for your comment, and for visiting us here at popcorntheblog.
Being The Baby of our family, I tend to resist all things structured. I, too, always thought outlining was too much like work, and even did the outline AFTER the paper, when outlining was assigned in class.
However, “plan” isn’t always a four-letter word. Sometimes all I need to do is change my attitude. When I saw how quickly and easily my daughter could finish a piece with an outline, I tried it again…now, I think of outlining as a shortcut.
Sometimes all I have to do is outsmart myself
Thanks for reminding me that an outline need not be such a fun-sucking project, and congrats on being Freshly Pressed!
Post-writing outlining! Brilliant! I wish I had thought of that back in my 10th grade social studies class! Yes, I am definitely starting to come around and am willing to concede that a little planning on the front end might enhance the writing experience (or at least help get to the finish line!) Thank you so much for stopping by- it was great to ‘meet’ you!
Hello Adrienne, good topic. I am fairly new to writing and have been trying to figure out ways to structure my own ideas for a book. I came across a piece of software for writers called WriteItNow (I have nothing to do with them I swear!) which can be downloaded for free, although the saving feature is disabled in the trial version. It has chapter headings, timelines, storyboard, a character section with relationship trees and many other features. One of the things I really like is the ability to grab a chapter drag it and put it somewhere else in the story. There are so many features I can’t tell you all of them here but it is quite intuitive to use. I wouldn’t begin to tell anyone how to work but I have found it to be a great tool for organising your work. For Nano you can even set yourself daily writing targets in words or time spent. Hope this helps someone like it is helping me. Keep up the good work!
Thanks! I’ve heard of this type of software– it seems like once you get the hang of using it, it would be very helpful! Plus, it’s great to know that there are all kinds of options out there for writing/outlining etc.– depending on how tech savvy (or not!) that you are. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your ideas and perspectives!
I just finished a draft blog on how my own outlined saved me from falling at the first hurdle in NaNoWriMo, then I found this on Freshly Pressed! I’m not a great planner of anything, and never outlined a story before, but this first one has really rescued me. Like you I tend to let me story unfold as its written, but now I’ve done and am using an outline, I do think its a good way to stay on track if, as with both of us, creativity choses its own winding path. Good Luck with NaNoWriMo, I hope you get to “The End”.
Thanks, StarCat! It is so great to hear about your success with an outline (especially since you were a skeptic like me.) This strengthens my resolve to give outlining a real chance! I really appreciate you stopping by and sharing your experience. Good luck to you too on Nano!
I tried outlining using “The Snowflake Method”. It’s good in some aspects, but I didn’t like mapping so much out beforehand. My secret to finishing my first novel? Decide on the ending, then write. The joy of writing, for me, is figuring out my characters as they go, and putting their personalities and motives into a dramatic scene, and then seeing where it takes you (and them). Now that’s fun!
Hi Tim! I had to look up The Snowflake Method– I had never heard of that before, so thanks for expanding my horizons. As far as your ‘secret’ method of finishing your first novel– that is something I’ve never tried before, which strikes me as a gross oversight since I enjoy problem-solving. If I had an ending– it would be an interesting challege to figure out how to get there! You’re right- that does sound like fun. Congrats on finishing your first novel! Come back and see us here on popcorntheblog again soon!
The problem I have with outlines is I get so attached to them. Then, when the plot doesn’t go according to plan, it’s very hard to give it up.
Hi Rachel! First of all– thank you for your comment- all the way from Australia! This Freshly Pressed bonanza of comments and bloggy conversation is a very cool thing, I must say. Well, I can tell you are an ‘advanced’ level outliner since you have reached the point where you get attached to them! I aspire to become so fond of my outlines that I can’t let them go! But I can see the bigger point you are making– like everything in life, it is possible to over-do the outline thing. Something to think about! Thanks for stopping by popcorntheblog– come back again soon!
I am 100% with you on this. During my college years I would do what I called “freewriting”, thinking that the less defined or constructed my story was, the more imaginative my story had the potential to be. After a couple of drafts, I just got SO TIRED of writing and rewriting the same scenes over and over again because I hadn’t taken the time to figure out the direction of the plot. Most introductory writers don’t want to write an outline, but personally I found myself writing outlines just to keep track of all the storylines!
Well put! You have completely summed up one of the reasons why I resisted outlining– I thought that to be really creative- my writing had to be totally free. (I think that since I did/do such highly structured and ‘assigned’ writing for my job, my creative writing had to be the total opposite of that.) But through examples like yours. I can see now that my writing can still be free and creative with an outline- it’s just that a bit more of the effort is done up front– thinking things through a bit. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my post! I really appreciate it!
I’ve thought about outling the stories I work on, but it always ended up seeming like a waste of time. My writing style allows me to shift gears to go where the words are taking me rather than trying to get the words to go where I think they should go. If that makes sense. But, for some of my more complex projects, including the current NaNoWriMo story I’m working on, I wonder if the benefits of having an outline would outweigh the negative that I’d be either locked into a certain progression per the outline, or be forced to constantly revamp the outline to match the changes in the story… Great post, and congratulations on being Freshly Pressed.
Good points, one and all! And yes, your description of your writing style makes total sense. Well, I was thinking that Nano makes a perfect ‘lab’ to try out something new (in my case, storyboarding), so maybe it would be worth it for you to give outlining a whirl and see what happens? Whichever way you decide to go– best of luck in getting all 50,000 words in! Thanks for reading the post, and for stopping by popcorntheblog!
Diagonal line across a page, bottom left to top right. Two long vertical lines to split it into thirds, for beginning, middle and end. Another line to mark the midpoint.
I force myself to write *something* at the beginning, the end, and each of the intersection lines. And then I split up the three sections into three sections each and make sure I’ve got something written for each of those. So I end up with something like eleven way-points for a story, which means I’m always working towards a goal that’s a few thousand words away max. That gives me direction, but enough flexibility to say whatever I need to say.
I love how everyone has different methods, but I saw that one a while ago and it’s really worked for me.
Wow- I am definitely going to try that for an upcoming project to see how it works- I think the ‘few thousand words at a time’ goal-setting is very appealing.Thanks for taking the time to describe it so clearly! And thanks for stopping by!
I use note cards and write out my outline, including where I would like for it to end.I find with this method I can break out my index cards and look to see if things are going as I planned and make changes where needed.
I love the idea of using note cards – quasi visual and easy to move around, add to or delete. I’m going to try this for my next writing project!
I have actually been carrying around notecards in my computer bag for a couple of years, fully intending to pull them out and use them in some constructive way. Well, I think the time is finally at hand! Thanks, Kimmie, for sharing what works for you– great idea!
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I always use outlines. I just published my fifth book, am midway through my sixth and have another 5 in various stages of outlining. I use an excel spreadsheet, break down the chapters with general ideas of how the book will flow and let the ideas percolate as I work on other projects. Periodically I get a great idea for a certain section of the book, maybe a portion of the dialogue, a character’s description or an action sequence, and I add it to the outline.
when I finally am ready to work on that project, it has a lot of details partially or fully fleshed out that I just have to write up.
I find that this process allows me to relax while I am writing – if a particular scene isn’t working, I just move to another scene, which is already sketched out and come back to the difficult one later.
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I have tried NaNo three times and still haven’t been able to complete a draft yet. The question you ask is a good one, but I’m still trying to figure out what works for me. I do know that full outlines haven’t so far. Jotting down at least 3-5 ideas per scene before the day’s writing begins has proven to be helpful at times. Because I am a visual person I have even tried the storyboards. I may try that again, this time creating a board for each of the three acts.
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